i think your art is looks good in all,nice concept too,i like the cloud sense,but i think i lost the sense of it,the color are monochrome dominate in gray,for the character shading good but i think her head too large for her body haha,this picture not have a depth and when i first see it it looks not interested for my eyes,cause the near and far position not had different in saturation colour and the light effect in the character will be perfect if you add a little circle of light with a little blur in the light source,keep improving
Thank you for your thoughts. I agree that i can improve at
The color aspekt seems to be kind of subjektive though.
I can see that you like vivid colors ( your work is really beautifull), nevertheless it wasnt my intention to have vivid, shining colors within this image.
Its a matter of taste, i suppose.